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Pride. It kills. It makes people do things they normally wouldn't. It makes them hard people to understand and know. It makes people stuck up, unbelievable. And most of all. Cold.


She knew that more then most people. She was a very proud girl, fourteen years old and already she was the least trusted member in her nieghborhood. All because she got into to many fights, ws to pridefull, and didn't take criticizm well.

She took hurtful words everyday from her enemies, friends and even her siblings. She just felt broken, but her pride wouldn't let her take anything, from anyone without returning the favor.

She sighed and turned from the magnificent view of the Colorado mountains. She walked back towards her house through the forest. She hurt. Mentally, she felt drained. Like coldness, hurt and rage was all that was left within her. She couldn't take much more. She wished her pride would release her.

So very much...
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DragonsAndDreamscape Oct 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
This is a very interesting observation on prideful mentality. Well, written and thoughtful. Wonderful job!
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Lurkassa Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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DragonsAndDreamscape Oct 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
No problem!
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